ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?!
Yeah, wire_hall_medic, I think your tone is great. You don't need to push it into a Hunger Games / Thunderdome / Running Man theme. Don't get me wrong, those are wonderful dystopias, but they create a sense of oppression that I think runs counter to what you are going for. Granted, I am inferring a lot from a demo, but I saw PAL as a more cheerful game, kind of a friendly, snarky, capitalist adventure. I guess the key difference is player agency: a life chosen rather than basically being a hostage to a system.
Anyway, fun stuff. I guess I got intrigued!